The diagram below shows the number of landline telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows the number of landline telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year period.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart illustrates the
number
of
landline
telephones
per 1000 people in several
countries
over a five-year period.
Overall
, it can be seen that
Singapore
had the highest
number
of
landline
telephones
per 1000 people compared to the other
countries
. There were no significant changes in the
number
of
landline
telephones
over the five-year period. In 2000, Brunei Darussalam had the highest
number
of
landline
telephone
ownership
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after
Singapore
, with a
figure
of 250. Almost all the other
countries
had figures below 50, except for Myanmar, which had the lowest
number
of
landline
phone
users
among all the
countries
. Between 2000 and 2004, there were no
landline
phone
users
in three
countries
from Indonesia to Myanmar, except for Myanmar, which had almost zero
users
. In terms of the
countries
with some
landline
telephone
users
, the Philippines and Thailand had figures that were almost the same.
However
, Thailand had
landline
telephone access only in 2000 and 2004.
Singapore
had the highest
number
of
landline
telephones
per 1000 people across all the years, with a
figure
of around 450,
while
Vietnam had the lowest
number
, with a
figure
of about 50, which was 9 times lower than
Singapore
's
figure
.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, landline, telephones, countries, singapore, figure, users with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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