The diagram below shows the number of landline telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart illustrates the
number
of landline
telephones
per 1000 people in several countries
over a five-year period.
Overall
, it can be seen that Singapore
had the highest number
of landline
telephones
per 1000 people compared to the other countries
. There were no significant changes in the number
of landline
telephones
over the five-year period.
In 2000, Brunei Darussalam had the highest number
of landline
telephone ownership
after Replace the word
owners
Singapore
, with a figure
of 250. Almost all the other countries
had figures below 50, except for Myanmar, which had the lowest number
of landline
phone users
among all the countries
.
Between 2000 and 2004, there were no landline
phone users
in three countries
from Indonesia to Myanmar, except for Myanmar, which had almost zero users
.
In terms of the countries
with some landline
telephone users
, the Philippines and Thailand had figures that were almost the same. However
, Thailand had landline
telephone access only in 2000 and 2004.
Singapore
had the highest number
of landline
telephones
per 1000 people across all the years, with a figure
of around 450, while
Vietnam had the lowest number
, with a figure
of about 50, which was 9 times lower than Singapore
's figure
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, landline, telephones, countries, singapore, figure, users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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