The Graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012.

This

report derives from a bar chart which illustrates the total

number

of how many

boys

and

girls

who perform in six different categories in

sport

in 2012.

Overall

, the

boys

prefer football over any other

sport

and dislike performing in hockey more than any other

sport

. Not only is

this

point clear, but

also

girls

spend

the

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most of their time

in

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swimming

while

hockey is a

sport

they perform the least amount of their time. Notably, the

number

of

boys

who play tennis is equal to the

number

of

girls

who perform in swimming which

this

number

is 50. The less

number

for both sexes is in hockey.

This

is around 10 for

girls

and over 10 for

boys

.

Additionally

, observe the highest rate in the chart belongs to

boys

which

is

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60 and

this

demonstrator is 3 times more than

girls

.

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this

point

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the

girls

show activity more than

boys

in badminton. The

number

of

girls

who play badminton is 40 and the

boys

are 30. On a final note of comparison,

approximently

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approximately

40

boys

and only 20

girls

spend their time

in

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cycling.