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Some people think that new houses should be built in the same style as older houses in the local area. Others disagree and say that local authorities should allow people to build houses in the styles of their own choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Along with
 the development of technology, many new methods have been invented to
design
houses
. In
this
 regard, it is argued
by
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some that new homes should be constructed in the same way as the older
house
while
 others believe that they should have a right to
design
 their living areas
in
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 their own taste. Both two opinions and my opinion will be outlined in
this
 essay. On the one hand, it is obvious that those residential complexes designed with the same
design
 pattern have become more successful than the others.
For instance
, Hoi An ancient town,
which
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is an attractive travel destination for tourists because of its old streets,
similar
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and similar
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design
 of ancient
houses
 and assembly halls.
Moreover
, if all
houses
of
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 the local areas have
the
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 similar
design
 can ensure
sense
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 of security and improve
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 of community of residents.
On the other hand
, the reason behind my agreement with the latter opinion that new architectural designs of
houses
 in their own interests
shoul
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should
 be allowed by the
goverment
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government
 is that
this
 can bring a new look to the area. Each
homes
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home
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 has its different look with
unique
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a unique
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 style of
design
,
thus
,
these
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this house
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house
 not only can  show the aesthetic taste of
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the houses'
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houses'
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 hosts but
also
 make a more
colorful
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 face of the town.
In addition
, the new
house
 with
advance
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equipments
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 and technologies can improve
living
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 standard of
house
 owners. 
To conclude
, owning a
house
 is a dream opportunity,
therefore
, individuals should be allowed to construct it at their will.
However
, in the heritage ,centres the government can take measures to retain the cultural outlook of the place.
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