Some people think that robots are very important for humans' future development. Others, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undoubted that robots these days handle a large number of our domestic and workplace tasks. Some people show their concerns about
this
ongoing trend, but I believe that it is
overall
a positive development. On the one hand, the heavy
use
of technology can result in bur overreliance on it.
This
is dangerous because when a machine malfunctions or breaks down, we often become completely helpless.
For example
, I once had to make some calculations for a project, but my cell phone ran out of battery, so I was unable to
use
its calculator app. I
then
wasted ten minutes trying to remember how to divide numbers properly, and in the
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I even got the final numbers wrong.
However
, these occurrences are very common and they certainly do not outweigh the benefits we derive from technology. First and foremost, technology saves us an incredible amount of time and effort. A washing machine,
for instance
, does not require people's presence to perform its duty,
whereas
scrubbing their clothes themselves takes up a considerable amount of time. Efficiency aside, robots
also
act as a safeguard because they increase accuracy in our work. In fact, without
machines
such
as computers, the work we do would be filled with imperfections and errors.
Finally
,
machines
prevent workplace injuries, especially in factories where
machines
lift heavy objects, or in assembly lines where they handle dangerous procedures or hazardous materials. The rising
use
of these robots has no doubt reduced countless injuries in recent human history.
Thus
, despite the concerns that some people may have, I believe that the increasing
use
of
machines
is more beneficial than detrimental to our society.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
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