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The first line chart illustrates the changes of the percentage of households using electrical appliances from 1920 to 2019.

The first line chart illustrates the changes of the percentage of households using electrical appliances from 1920 to 2019.
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The first line chart illustrates the changes
of
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 the
percentage
 of households using electrical appliances from 1920 to 2019. The second line chart shows the changes
of
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in
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 the number of hours doing housework from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
, the entire
percentage
 of households that use electrical appliances increased.The refrigerator showed the biggest change among
three
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the three
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,
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while
washing
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the washing
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 machine showed the lowest
changes
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change
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.
In contrast
, the number of hours for housework generally decreased. In the first line graph, the washing machine rated about 70% which was the latest and the highest
percentage
. In 1980, the
percentage
 unexpectedly decreased,
however
, it increased again. The refrigerator showed
rapid
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a rapid
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 increase until 1980 and maintained the highest
percentage
 continuously. The vacuum cleaner gradually increased from 30% in 1920 to 100% in 2000. In the second graph, the
percentage
 gradually decreased except for 1980 to 2000 which showed the same
percentage
(20%). The highest
percentage
 was 50% in 1920 and the lowest
percentage
 was almost 10% in 2019.
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