Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they shiuld only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Today it is believed that
students
ought to be taught their enjoyable and preferable subjects
in all universities or colleges. However
, some people consider that teacher
should only teach essential Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
subjects
that will be helpful in the future
, namely depending on science
and technology
. In my opinion, there are several advantages and disadvantages of
these views and I will give some personal Change preposition
to
opinion
with reasons and examples in my essay.
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opinions
Although
some people think that all
educational places Change preposition
in all
students
should learn whatever they do not want , such
as science
or technology
, I consider that every student
's interests are considered to
the Change preposition
apply
subjects
by the educational system. If student
Correct article usage
a student
want
to learn one Change the verb form
wants
subject
, he or she will try to learn the essential degree of this
subject
and also
student
can all difficulties of Correct article usage
the student
subject
in the studying time. Add an article
the subject
a subject
As a
result
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,result
this
types of Correct determiner usage
these
students
achieve a lot of rewards in the future
life. Moreover
, I recommend that having interest
in Add an article
an interest
subjects
not only improve
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improves
child's
new abilities or horizons to the world Correct article usage
a child's
,
but Remove the comma
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also
open
new ideas for their Correct subject-verb agreement
opens
subject
. That's mean
that they do enjoy their studying.
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On the other hand
, now there are several important subjects
, for
instance
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,instance
technology
and science
which are connected with life. Therefore
, some suggested that technology
and science
should be allowed to study every student
in all universities. In my opinion, it is wrong
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the wrong
view
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to view
to
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of
educational
system. Because many youngsters have not Add an article
the educational
encouraging
or Change the verb form
encouraged
interests
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interested
to
their university in order to compulsory Change preposition
in
subjects
. If they do not prefer learning to
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apply
science
or technology
, they maybe go to the
university by the way. Correct article usage
apply
As a
result
they cannot a good job or necessary career in the Add a comma
,result
future
.
In conclusion, some suggested that the
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students
of all educational places should study whatever they do
want. Others think that Unnecessary verb
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students
ought to be learned subjects
that necessary
in Add a missing verb
are necessary
the
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their
future
life which related
to Add a missing verb
are related
science
or technology
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