A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntaryl unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter• explain why you want to do voluntary/unpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

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Dear sir, I am writing to you with regard to the advertisement posted for the requirement of a volunteer at your museum. Considering my skills and desires, I wanted to inform you that I am interested in

this

opportunity.

Firstly

, I wanted to tell you that I am a people-loving person, and I would always want to be around people.

This

social nature of mine would be an aid in attending to the customers at your museum.

Additionally

, I am

also

belonging to a family of artists, and

art

runs in my blood. A person who values

art

such

an extent would help in addressing the customers better.

Hence

, I will be able to help them to a greater extent with my social skills and artistic background.

This

opportunity would

also

help me to be around

art

and people which will

further

enhance my career as I am pursuing my postgraduate in Conservation of

Art

through technology. Please note that I will be available from Monday to Saturday from 4 PM onwards starting next month. Kindly let me know if we can have a face-to-face conversation to understand our mutual needs regarding

this

employment. Looking forward to your response Yours faithfully Ritika G. s

Submitted by IRWIN.RITIKA on Tue Apr 18 2023

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