You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter: say how you came to know about him/her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer.

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Dear Mr Williams , I am very glad to connect with you . Would like to introduce myself , I am Maria and live near you in Toronto city , I got your contact details from my neighbour ,

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himself pursued the French language course at your well-known institute about 6 months ago .

To begin

with , I would like to give a brief introduction about myself. I shifted here from India with my Spouse through a PR visa early

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year in 2023 and working at Wall Mart as a part-time executive.

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, recently have got an amazing opportunity in a multinational company for the post of receptionist

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they require the candidate to join after 2 weeks ,

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policy to hire staff with basic communication skills in the French language.

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this

change is very important to me and cannot lose it in any manner . Would really appreciate your valuable time in

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particular situation ,

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, it is for a short period of time , please allow me to attend both the morning and evening sessions you are teaching for French. For any

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information kindly contact me , my phone number is - 0706437990 and my email address is [email protected] . Thank you for your support and look forward to your positive revert back . Thanks and best regards, Maria Martin

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You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live. Write a letter to the teacher. In the letter: say how you came to know about him/her explain why you want to learn ask what help they can offer.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam”. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Many university students live with their families, while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages both situations ?

Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people lives. Other think that adults life brings more happiest, in spite of great responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

TOPIC: In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? What can be done to deal with this?

The technology generates language translation software, decreasing the importance of learning more languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?