A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Leanna, I am so glad to hear that you are considering going on a camping holiday

this

year. I am writing

this

letter to give you some tips for camping before you go. During your school life, you had no chance to enjoy camping with friends

due to

having lots of exams. But, Now you graduated from school and you have free time to do anything.

Moreover

this

is perfect timing to go to a campsite because of the weather which started the spring season

last

week.

Also

, you are an active person who enjoys outdoor activities. Before you leave, I want to tell you something to be careful about. First of all, you need to take some insulated clothes. Because sleeping in a tent the outside is pretty much colder than you expected.

Second,

you must buy a spray to kill insects because there are so many various insects. Actually, I have

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plan to go to The National Park for staying at the mountain for 3 days next week. If you do not mind, I would really like to go with you to enjoy camping for the first time. I am looking forward to replying as soon as possible with a positive answer. Lovely, Tommy

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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The Closing

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The chart below show the percentage of fatal accidents by locations in a European country. The survey was conducted in 2000.

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A REPORT INDICATED THAT MANY CHILDREN BETWEEN 7 AND 11 SPEND TOO MUCH TIME WATCHING TELEVISION AND / OR PLAY VIDEO GAMES. HOW DOES THE PROBLEM AFFECT THE CHILDREN, THEIR FAMILIES AND SOCIETY? WHAT MEASURES CAN BE TAKEN TO CONTROL IT?