The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when necessary.

The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons when necessary.
The graph provides information about the amount of
water
consumed in American houses every day with and without preservation strategies.
Overall
, the amount of
water
that American households spend without conservation methods is wider than homes that use conservation practices on a daily bases. A closer view of the data reveals that flushing the toilet with a
water
consumption process may reduce by half the number it is required by not using these strategies, from 20
gallons
to 10
gallons
. Other home uses of
water
such
as utilizing a washing machine, taking a shower and leaks may
also
be significantly reduced by using these methods.
However
, there are some home
water
uses that seem not to widen a gap difference in
water
usage even if conservation techniques are being applied. Washing dishes by dishwasher continues spending 1 gallon of
water
approximately, using faucets 10
gallons
, and other home operations remain in 2
gallons
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, gallons with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
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