You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe your new apartment invite him/her to pay a visit

Dear Sandra , Hope you are doing well!! I am writing

this

letter to express my joy about the new house we have shifted to. As you know , the flat which we were staying in was just 1 room set and with growing kids was being tough to manage with their learnings.

Although

, it's

also

important to give some space to children in their teenage years .

On the other hand

, would love to tell you some details about the new apartment we have shifted to . We have shifted to a 3 bedroom set home with a huge lounge area and a small bar at the corner of the Living area .

In addition

, there is a mini garden in the back lounge area with beautiful growing up plants and flowers.

This

is really a dream come true and will appreciate your presence at the housewarming party we are throwing, though, we have not settled completely but can't wait to meet all the family and friends . We are arranging the gathering somewhere around next week, will let you know all details very soon over our next chat . Very excited to have you over , please do join us . Yours lovingly, Maria

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You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe your new apartment invite him/her to pay a visit

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?

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