You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in the city. Write a letter to your friend:, 1.Explain what you like to do. 2.Tell him/her what type of work or studies you had completed. 3.Ask for assistance in connecting an appropriate institution

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Dear Manpreet, Hope you are doing well. It's been a long time since we met. I still remember our childhood days when we used to go out and have fun together. I wish we meet soon again. You remember we had a conversation

last

time and I told you how keen I am to learn accountancy. Well, guess what? I was searching for the best accounting colleges in Europe and it landed me in your place in London. After our school, I got myself admitted to Thapar University. I did my BCOM and a one-year internship at KPMG in Chandigarh. Now, I am looking for a Master's course and I believe that a foreign degree would land me decent job opportunities around the globe. I have shortlisted a few of the Universities and I hope that you would help me in selecting my college. I have mailed my Uncle

also

, but since you are a working professional, I believe you will be able to help me more. I am landing on the 10th of May and I hope to see you soon. Kindly drop me a mail or hit me up on my number, once you get time. Yours truly, Aman.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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