You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter. -Correct the information in the article -Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information -Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to address some inaccuracies in the recent article about my hometown that was published in your travel magazine.

Firstly

, I would like to point out

mistake

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a mistake

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you did

while

you

written

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wrote

have written

show examples

Correct article usage

the

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article. You mentioned

wrong

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the wrong

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location of my

hotel

Moreover

, the telephone number you

written

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wrote

have written

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was

also

wrong.

Secondly

, it is important for me to correct the information because most

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apply

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travellers

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the travellers

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going to

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their destination

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destination

Fix the agreement mistake

destinations

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based on what they read in the travel magazine. To illustrate

this

, you mentioned

wrong

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the wrong

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phone number in an article, and

as a result

, I lose a number of travellers who

coming

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came

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to my

hotel

Consequently

, my

hotel

's annual growth will become less.

Lastly

, I would request you to update incorrect information about my

hotel

in your next magazine. I would appreciate your immediate attention regarding

this

matter. I look forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Milav Soni

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