The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart illustrates three main challenges

people

aged 18 to 55 face when they are living abroad.

Overall

, there are some problems that integrate into

people

’s lives

while

they are living overseas. In most cases, older

people

above 55 find it hard in learning the local

language

while

people

aged 18-34 have difficulty in making friends, and

people

aged 35 to 54 feel that finding an area to live is the hardest among other problems.

To begin

with, It can be clearly seen that only around 46% of young

people

aged 18 to 34 experienced that building a friendship is the most difficult thing,

while

those aged between 35 and 54 think it’s not that challenging with only around 35% responding to that.

In contrast

, there is the opposite situation for those above 55, they only consider it as the second least problem they faced.

Additionally

, finding a place to live is another key challenge, particularly for those middle-aged (35-54) and young

people

, as around 40% of responders in both aged

group

Change to a plural noun

groups

show examples

have

this

problem,

whereas

the adults above 55 find it as the least serious issue they experienced among other problems.

Finally

, one of the most influential variables to support how

people

survive in a new country is understanding the local

language

. Youth aged from 18 to 34 can easily learn the local

language

compared to other group aged,

while

adults over 55 find learning that

language

is the most challenging one to survive in the other country.

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