You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

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Dear Sir or Madam My name is SABER Youcef and I am writing

this

letter regarding the tennis

course

advertisement in the newspaper. From a young age, I have always wanted to learn tennis;

however

, I have never had the chance to do it, and when I saw your

course

I thought that

this

is the perfect opportunity for me in order to practise

this

sport.

Although

I want to continue the lessons till the end, I am afraid I have got an issue, my boss has already planned a business trip for me

at the end

of the month and unfortunately, it coincides with the

last

three sessions of the

course

;

therefore

, I will not be able to attend them. As I will not be present in the full

course

, is there any chance that you will compensate me for the days that I will miss? I think that would be a fair deal,

however

, I am not fully aware of your policies in regard to refunding clients. As my matter is urgent, a quick response would be appreciated Yours faithfully SABER Youcef

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You saw an advertisement for a tennis course in England but you have one or two problems and can’t stay the whole course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

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