You have learned about an international job that is available within the company you currently work for and you want to apply.   Write a letter to the hiring manager. In your letter     Say why you are applying for this international position   Describe the job you are currently doing for the company   Tell him/her why you think you will be good at the job     Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam

Dear Sir, I am
writting
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this
letter to apply for the open position of cybersecurity consultant with the Canadian office of KPMG. I am currently employed in the same position in the India office, and I would like to
persue
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this
opprtunity
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as it matches my skills and competency. I have
also
recently obtained my permanent residency
for
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in

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Canada, and I am planning to move there with
family
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soon. I am currently working as a cybersecurity professional in the Risk advisory business of the firm. I help my clients to build cybersecurity
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strategies

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and infrastructure, and ensure compliance
to
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security standards
such
as NIST and ISO27001. I have more than 10 years of experience in
this
domain and I am
also
a certified cyber architect. Being a part of the same organization, I understand the culture and value system of the organization and I will be ready to deliver value to the customers from day 1.
Further
, I
also
have extensive experience in
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industry where your team wants to expand its business.
Therefore
, I believe I will be a good fit for
this
vacancy. Kindly consider the application. Looking forward to
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from you on
this
. Yours
faithfuly
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, Apoorva
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