You recently received a letter from a friend asking for an advice about whether to go to school ir try to get a job. You think he/she skould get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • say why he/she would to enjoy going to college. •expalin why getting a kob is a good idea for him. •suggest type of job that would be suitable for him/her.

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Hello Kasia, I am writing

this

letter to advise you asked me through your letter that you're in a dilemma

whether

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about whether

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to go to college or start a

job

. I think you should start doing a

job

instead

further

studies

First,

tell you why not choose to do

studies

as it will be expensive as compared to what you'

learn. College

studies

are totally theoretical, which means, no skill development and less exposure.

On the other hand

, starting work right after school have many benefits as you'

start earning money at an early age and you'

have more freedom to do shopping. Keeping the fun part aside, a

Job

will help you to find your hidden skills and talents, and

also

will help in polishing them, which will

further

help in deciding the future plans for your higher

studies

. I've noticed you have excellent communication skills, I think jobs like receptionist and call centre you look for. I am sure you'

have a great time doing

this

type of

job

. I hope you'

like the advice and looking forward to seeing you soon. All the best for your future. Warm regards, Jaskirat

kaur

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