Your car is hired from a company and while you are driving on holiday, you have a small accident. Your will have to write a letter to the company to explain it. You need to explain the following: -when and where you hired it -describe how the accident happened -And what kind of action you took after the accident.

#car #company #holiday #accident #-when #-describe #-and #action

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter in regard to the little incident that happened to me

while

I was away

while

using the car that I rented from your company. First of all, I would like to apologize for what happened to your automobile.

Last

April 14th, I hired a car from your Company, Cars and Go Inc from your branch in Mandaluyong City. I decided to visit my parents in Caloocan City for three days

due to

the upcoming holiday.

However

, I had a little accident

while

I was driving on a narrow road. I failed to see that there was a hole on the right side of the road. The tire broke and the car got a small scratch from the side near the tire. With that incident, I immediately changed the tire but it is unfortunate to say that the scratch was still there. I fully acknowledge my recklessness in

this

matter. I am willing to pay the amount of damage I have caused. Thank you so much for your understanding. Feel free to contact me through my email to set an arrangement regarding

this

matter. Yours faithfully, Ms Rhea Emano

Submitted by rhealynemano on Sat Apr 15 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 8.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

Word count

Become Premium

Check as many essays as you want
Analyze highlighted mistakes
Use the built-in grammar checker
Discover your weaknesses
Get suggestions to get a higher score
Browse the history of checked essays
14-day money back guarantee

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children s story books are wasting their time which could better used doing other more useful activities . To what extend do you agree
To read story book at younger ages may not be helpful. A part of people think children should not spend a lot of time for they read story books.I disagree with subject for two reasons.children should reads story book that are suitable for their age.Moreover Children Can read variety of topics to gain experience .Other people believe that children should do useful activities.
7.5
band
Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people. We know what they eat, where they buy their clothes and who they love. We also often see pictures of them in private situations. Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspaper to give this kind of private information about people?
Generally, people read newspapers to find out about world current affairs and they read magazines to be entertained. Therefore, one would expect to find articles that feature the private lives of famous people in magazines rather than newspapers. However, nowadays, more and more newspapers include stories like these which are neither informative nor useful.
6
band
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Few individuals are of the argument about teaching voluntary service to students as a mandatory part of their secondary school syllabus. This essay agrees with that suggestion. Firstly, this essay will discuss how voluntary work for non governmental organisations will develop soft skills and secondly, discuss how extra curricular activities keeps them highly motivated and physically active.
6
band
The student should live with parents or live away when studying at university. Agree or disagree?
Some students prefer to live with their family when pursuing tertiary education, others; however, believe that it is better to accommodate independently than relying on their parents. As from my perspective, living in the same house with our parents is a better option for the students when studying at the university; nevertheless, the other option is also an appropriate choice for those scholars.
6
band
More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is argued that now staffs from companies are not necessary to go to the offices because they can work from home. In my opinion, this statement has some benefits but the drawbacks are more.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children s story books are wasting their time which could better used doing other more useful activities . To what extend do you agree

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The student should live with parents or live away when studying at university. Agree or disagree?

More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home Do you think this is a positive or negative development?