You have made a reservation at a hotel for a business trip for you and your colleagues. However, you need to make some changes to your booking. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: give details of your current booking explain what changes you need to make and why ask the manager to make some special arrangements for your business meetings

Dear Madam I and my colleagues have ordered special rooms from your hotel. Thank you in advance for your attention. I have a request from you. Can you allocate additional rooms for us because we may have different language situations and we may have an emergency meeting? I ask you to consider
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and I hope you will understand my proposal correctly. See you soon Elizabeth Edison
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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