You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live.write a letter to the teacher in the letter: say how you came to know about him/her, explain why you want to learn, ask whatbhelp the can offer

Dear Mrs Stepanova My name is Zalina and I am writing

this

letter to enquire about English language lessons, especially IELTS preparation classes. I have read about your language courses in the Telegram channel group and after reading the reviews I am absolutely sure that your knowledge and experience will help me to pass the exam.

Moreover

, I would like to know about the availability of fast-track courses because I booked for the exam on the 3rd of May.

Furthermore

, it would be interesting to know how the classes are going. I will be grateful if you could tell me what the price is and how long could be the lessons. I work from 9.00 to 15.00, so after that , the time would be fine. I would like to commence as soon as possible. You could send the above-mentioned information to my e-mail or fax. I look forward to receiving a prompt reply. Yours sincerely Zalina Kam

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