Few people devote time to hobbies nowadays. Say why you think this is the case and what effect this has on the individual and society in general.

Hobbies
are activities that
people
engage in their spare
time
to explore the interests they have in
life
,
such
as
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art, sports and dance etc.
Hobbies
are developed since a
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person's
childhood
, which could even turn
as
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their
career
in adult
life
. It is important for an
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individual
to have a
hobby
. Having a
hobby
could help
an
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individual
in their
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and mindfulness. In an
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individual's
childhood
,
hobbies
are mainly encouraged by their parents and teachers, to help them develop
extracarricular
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extracurricular
activities.
Furthermore
,
this
could help
an
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individuals
in their adult
life
to allow them to spend some
time
with their selves. The adult
life
of an
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individual
can be really busy and hectic with multiple responsibilities and having a
hobby
could allow them to get away from the stress.
Subsequently
, developing a
hobby
since
childhood
could
also
lead to an amazing
career
.
For example
, cricketers who started playing cricket as a
hobby
in their
childhood
have a big
career
in sports and have achieved stardom as well.
On the other hand
, the world today has become extremely busy with the development of technology and economies. As the world economies grow, the need to make more income has become an essential part of
life
. The reason
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why few
people
devote their
time
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hobbies
is because the work and personal
life
balance has become extremely difficult with the
time
people
put
in
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their
career
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. Over
time
,
an
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individual
become extremely consumed by their day-to-day
life
and
career
,
they
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forget to allow some
time
for their selves,
such
as involving in
hobbies
. Having a
hobby
is an essential part of
life
and
this
could be an example for
the
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society and mainly for the future generation to develop
such
interests.
Furthermore
, having a
hobby
allows
people
to have a healthy lifestyle as well.
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