You have been busy with your studies for the past month and haven't had time to visit your family. Write a letter to your grandmother. In your letter: Apologize for not getting in touch with her sooner Explain why you have been so busy Arrange a time to visit Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Grandmother,

#studies #month #haven #time #visit #grandmother #touch #addresses

Dear Grandmother, I hope you are in good health! It is been a

while

since I spoke with you

last

time.

However

,I still do remember you have a doctor's appointment next week Please do not forget it. First of all,I am extremely sorry for not getting in touch with you earlier.and I am sure that you will forgive me. Since I was preparing for the final exam

last

month I was busy with my studies

as well as

college projects and I was not able to find any free time

last

month.and again I am deeply sorry and I hope you will understand my situation here. I am planning to visit you next week so we both can go to visit a doctor and not only that I believe that you already heard the news that the newly opened seafood restaurant in the town and I heard the food over there is amazing.So I have booked the table for us and we can enjoy fresh seafood with live music. Hope to see you soon, Much love, Sam

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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