A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. • Thank them for the present and say why you particularly like it • describe what other presents you received • explain what other things you did

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

One main idea per paragraph

Include greeting and closing

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical resource: 9.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms

Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question

Use an appropriate tone

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A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. • Thank them for the present and say why you particularly like it • describe what other presents you received • explain what other things you did

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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