A museum near your home is looking for people to do a part time unpaid work. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary work. Explain why you want to work, describe some skills you have, and give details of your availability.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply internship program

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your art gallant as a receptionist. I am

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artsy, and looking for a

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job with enjoyment.

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museum.

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, I was mesmerized by the receptionist when I visited

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the NASA exhibition since I

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and cranny there, resulting in my unforgettable memory. I am just wondering if I could entertain

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the guests as

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part of your company. In terms of my skills, I am

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, independent and

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confidence that once I learnt the roles, I will be a reliable staff. My availability is flexible because I am working at night time, so I have no preference for

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at daytime, which is the museum business hours. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully,

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A museum near your home is looking for people to do a part time unpaid work. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary work. Explain why you want to work, describe some skills you have, and give details of your availability.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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The illustrations show two stages in the development of the mobile phone. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that a person can never understand a culture of the country unless they speak the language. Do you agree with this opinion?

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