you recently went to a lecture that you very much enjoied write a letter to organiser of the lecture ,in your letter

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Dear Madam My name is

nandika

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Nandika

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and I had the pleasure of attending the

lecture

of your organization earlier

this

week on the reducing bee population .

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cannot tell you how much enjoyed the

lecture

.The lecturer who gave it was knowledgeable and interesting and had the ability to pass information in a funny way . I was hoping that it would be possible for me to contract the

lecture

in order that I could show my appreciation .If you might not able to pass his

contract

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details

for

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me ,kindly request to you pass my details to him to contact me .,

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I have the opportunity for him to invite

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the same

lecture

at a society that I'm a member of. I know your organization regular lectures and I hope you don’t mind if I suggest a topic that you might someone talk about that Thank you for your organization

such

a wonderful evening

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sincerely Nandika

Submitted by nandikanw on Thu Apr 13 2023

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you recently went to a lecture that you very much enjoied write a letter to organiser of the lecture ,in your letter

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Some people think that museums’ main function is to educate people, the others suggest that they can also serve for entertainment purposes. What is your opinion?

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