you are a college student in and English-speaking country. You are unhappy with your rented accommodation so you have to request college accomodation. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter Introduce yourself Why you are unhappy with rented accommodation Why you believe college accommodation is better for you
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It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The word college doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
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It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
The noun phrase new room seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.
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It appears that the form of the verb need does not work with am in this sentence.
The noun phrase new place seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
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It appears that the word your is not the correct form of the possessive pronoun. Consider changing it.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite