You have just read an article in a national newspaper claiming that town centres in your country all look very similar. You don’t fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter, saywhich point in the article do you agree with? Explain ways your town centre differs from most other town centres offer to give a guided tour of your town to the article’s writer.

Dear
Mr.
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Shawn, I am writing
this
letter to express my point of view with
regards
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to the article that you have written in the ‘Paradise’ national newspaper on
23 rd
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23rd
of February 2023 (page 34). You have clearly mentioned that
town
centres
across Mauritius look similar,
however
, I do not fully agree with
this
statement. I would not disagree with the fact that
town
centres
have more or less the same outlook,
however
, the buildings differ in size and layout. Some
centres
accommodate a large number of people compared to others. There are numerous facilities like children’s
playroom
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in some
town
centres
.
On the contrary
, these facilities are not present in some
centres
across Mauritius. I would like to offer you a guided tour of my
town
so that you can get a clearer picture of my perspective. I would be grateful if you could please spare some time so that we can discuss
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this
topic jointly. Yours Sincerely, K.Jad
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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