You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager,

#work #company #advertisement #course #job #manager

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writting

this

letter to say about a training

course

: “ The history about

kitchen

equipment

and how to use kichen

equipment

like a internatinal chef”. I saw

this

advertisement on a pose near the mall windows. It really impress me to experience

this

trainning

course

, i strongly believe that it will be usefull for my job. In relation

this

trainning lesson, it is intensive training

course

for one week, in the advertisement i they show me the information that they will training about facts and some skills to use

kitchen

equipment

like: how important when the “blender” was born, how to use right knife and safety or share some tips about

kitchen

to be a michelin chef. By these special things i can learn on

this

trainning

course

, i hope that company will accept my day-off permission letter and provide some kichen

equipment

to me to learn

this

course

. I claim that after i finished

this

trainning

course

i will recceptive more theory and skills to master the

kitchen

and

above all

is to get star Michelin for restaurant of our company. Your faithfully. Mary

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