Samples Band 9

IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 9

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Nowadays, celebrities earn more money than the politicians do. What are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or a positive development?

This is true that superstars have more revenue than politicians, so recently this has become a hot debate among people in society. This has diverse reasons and in this essay, I cite the main reasons and explain why this is a positive development.

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Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages

In modern society, the decision to have offspring is postponed to later in life. In this essay, I will describe the reasons for this trend, pros and cons as a consequence of this decision. Firstly I will give examples of possible causes, secondly, I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of this situation.

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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to the latest fashion. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

To date, in most countries, people would choose their attire and hairdos based on the current trends. These changes have had a huge impact on our lives. Yet it has both pros and cons. The following paragraphs will discuss the key factors of this scenario as well as the consequences.

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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to the latest fashion. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

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"These days people succeed in their chosen profession because they are good communicators and not just experts in a particular field". Discuss the reasons and why is the case. Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the ability to establish an efficient intellectual connection with other individuals is a prominent criterion in approaching prosperity, particularly in the working environment. Yet, there remains a controversial debate as to whether the overall effect of this skill can be benevolent in reaching success or the expertise in a career is more influential. This essay will discuss the proposed topic from both sides of view with some detailed explanations.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason to doing this? is this a negative or positive development?

Since a few years ago, more and more adults have been increasing their concerns about their kids future. These days, to secure that children succeed parents are pushing harder. This essay will discuss some of the reasons for this situation and how it could improve kids future decisions. However, I believe that does not have a balance could be disadvantageous.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

It is arguable that the advancement of the medical care scheme undoubtedly soars the life expectancy of many. Thus, communities have to look after several older individuals. In my opinion, the closest parents will deal properly with that since it is their responsibility to care for them. Although it will press the health structure. This essay will shed light on both sides of the matter and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view

Certain individuals think that it is cruel to keep non-human species in confined spaces like a zoo whereas the other outlook points to the advantages for both human and non-human species. I tend to conform to the second view but both will be discussed in this essay.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

It is believed that the environmental protectors are alarmed concerning the overwhelming increased environmental pollution on streams, ponds and the oceans. I believe that environmental contamination brings adverse effects on aquatic wildlife and human social lives. This essay will shed light on the motives and their consequences providing evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. discuss both these views and give your own.

Ups and downs are part of life and there is no constant poverty or richness, it's actually varying parameters. It is believed to be the best to face hardships like having poor work or sparse treasures. It is argued to be better to do hard work and make better the worst things. This will highlight both sides of the argument and then I will put forward my own perception of the matter.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration. To what consequences can it lead.

Moving to another country leaving their native place has become extremely popular these days. Immigration has shown a major effect on society. This essay will provide details about the causes of this situation and the consequences that are likely to be seen in future.

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To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and give any relavent examples from your own knowledge or experienc.

It is often argued that that the internet was been the most important technological achievement that made living effortlessly, especially in this time of the covid-19 pandemic and for the future of this world. It is an imperative tool when it comes to communication and industry thus promoting the development of the economy.

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To what extent has the internet made life more convenient? Give reasons for your answer and give any relavent examples from your own knowledge or experienc.

It is often argued that the internet was been the most important technological advancement of the human world as it made living effortlessly, especially in this time of the covid-19 pandemic and for the future of this world. It is an imperative tool when it comes to communication and industry thus promoting the development of the economy.

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Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you a little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

In this modern era, competition is rising rapidly and as a result, people are opting for jobs with long working hours and higher wages to survive. Although working day and night helps them earn money, it leaves them with no leisure time to spend with family and friends. Personally, I feel I will always choose my family before anything else, so, I will opt for low paying job with shorter hours to spend time with my family.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

The shopping for unnecessary and costly items have been growing in the modern era. This trend is backed by the materialistic thinking of the masses which is not a sign of developed society. The government and the public need to take some strict measures to resolve the issue.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

The advancement of the medical system undoubtedly enhances human beings life expectancy. Thus, communities have to look after the old folk. In my opinion, the population will handle it properly so that the elderly crowd feel protected. This essay will shed light on both reasons for caring for the old-aged and provide solutions to overcome possible drawbacks.

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To alive traffic problems, the government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

There is a huge problem with traffic jams today and governments have to do something to stabilize the situation. One approach is suggested: to tax private car owners more and increase the use of public transport. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this solution. One of the crucial advantages of this situation would be improving air quality due to decreased amount of pollutions caused by using fuel.

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the educational quality is improving and children gain a lot of knowledge in their childhood. Should public schools give the administration’s support? In this essay, I will explain the reason and solve this problem.

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Many efforts have been made by countries to address challenges concerning the environment but the situation have not improved. What are the possible reasons for environmental degradation? Are there any solution to combat this problem? Support your answers with specific reasons and example.

Music has been gaining a lot of attention from people nowadays. Some educators believe that playing musical instruments should be made a mandatory part of education whilst some others don't. However, I do not completely agree with mandating music for all the students. In the below essay I will draw my arguments to support the aforementioned viewpoint.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many individuals think that person with well-being usually eats more healthy meals, does enough workouts and lives without stress or bur out. Maybe it is a general thought about being healthy. In my country, it seems that Mongolians call a healthy person who weighs a suitable weight and doesn't have any disease diagnosed by doctors. Now I will explain my opinion on what person is healthy.

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