IELTS Problem and Solution Writing Samples Band 9. Page 7

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transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

Traffic congestion poses a serious threat to many countries. Experts throughout the world have argued that delayed transportation and extended travel times due to unreliable transport systems are the most popular issues in city regions. This essay will discuss the major causes associated with this issue and propose some possible solutions to mitigate the problem with relevant examples

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Lack of sleep has caused a number of problems for people lately. There have been complaints about difficulties they have with sleeping. As family members are getting busier and due to their concerns about life and children, getting enough sleep has become a challenge.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Nowadays, most people have little time to socialize with their neighbours. This is happened due to the busy life of individuals which is caused by economic problems they tackle with. This essay cites a few causes and provides some solutions to alleviate this issue.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

These days, there is an ever-growing number of product manufacture that brings about environmental problems. In this essay, both causes and feasible solutions will be analyzed.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

In this day and age, due to the proliferation of technology, the approach most people communicate with each other has been innovative, which seems to be an increasingly common trend in many parts of the world. From my perspective, the merits would eclipse the downsides.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Nowadays, most people have little time to socialize with their neighbours. This is happened due to the busy life of individuals which is caused by economic problems they tackle with. This essay cites a few causes and provides some solutions to alleviate this issue.

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Recent research suggested that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. What is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

It is undeniable that after the courts release convicts. Most of them commit crimes. Over recent years, this complication has become one of the most pressing issues because it can affect society. The following paragraph will examine the solution to solve this issue.

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Recent research suggested that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. What is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

One purpose of the punishment is to correct the anti-social behaviour of offenders. Recent research has shown that most of the prisoners continue their violent behaviours even after release from prison. There are various possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle these problems.

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Recent research suggested that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. What is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

One purpose of the punishment is to correct the anti-social behaviour of offenders. Recent research has shown that most of the prisoners continue their violent behaviours even after release from prison. There are various possible reasons for this, but steps can definitely be taken to tackle these problems.

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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming. why is global warming a problem? what can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

Global warming has now become the hot topic of every discussion forum in the world. The development of many countries has given birth to various environmental issues such as global warming. This essay will not only discuss the impacts of it but also shed some light on the solutions.

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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in their contribution to global warming. why is global warming a problem? what can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

Global warming has now become the hot topic of every discussion forum in the world. The development of many countries has given birth to various environmental issues such as global warming. This essay will not only discuss the impacts of it but also shed some light on the solutions.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

In many developed countries, the average life period of each person is significantly improving. However, the grey population can lead to various issues for individuals and society and it should be dealt with by some effective solutions.

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Today, the quality of life in large cities are decreasing, what are the main causes and it's solutions?

Nowadays, a trend is seen in the diminishing of the quality of life in the urban areas. The forthcoming paragraphs will highlight what are the different causes behind this and a few potential measures to resolve it.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

It is undeniable that every nation around the world has various issues such as environmental problems, pollutions, or education. From my perspective in the next decade, the biggest challenge my country, Thailand, has to encounter is over elderly population. This essay below will discuss this problem as well as its possible solution.

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An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

Nowadays, many children are dwelling on different kinds of junk foods that have less nutritional value as compared to traditional home-cooked meals, leading to many associated health risks, one of which is overweightness. This essay will firstly, examine various negative aspects of consuming an unhealthy diet trend and secondly, some of the feasible solutions will be discussed.

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The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for the poor in undeveloped countries but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

The population has increased tremendously around the world. This causes serious problems for the poor citizens in undeveloped nations and hinders the development in industrialized and developing countries. This essay shall discuss poverty which is the main concern in underdeveloped nations, and unemployment in developing countries. The birth control program is suggested as a feasible solution to address this issue.

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The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for the poor in undeveloped countries but also for industrialized and developing nations. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.

The population has increased tremendously around the world. This causes serious problems for the poor citizens in undeveloped nations and hinders the development in industrialized and developing countries. This essay shall discuss poverty which is the main concern in underdeveloped nations, and unemployment in developing countries. The birth control program is suggested as a feasible solution to address this issue.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to improve a higher tax on this kind of food.

A surge in diseases caused by consumption of street eatables in citizens of few nations is noticed. As a consequence, it was suggested that taxation should be increased on this type of harmful essential commodities. This solution contributes to influencing the food choice of the middle-class citizens which causes a lot of ruckus in society. To recommend a proper solution to this problem, both views will be considered in the essay.

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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

Nowadays, private cars are an extremely popular method of transportation since it is really convenient and cheaper than public transportation. This essay will discuss the main problems of using a private van and possible solutions to this problem.

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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

In various countries around the world, climate change had some serious impacts on different life aspects of people, natural habitats, and the environment. However, there are also few solutions suggested minimising the ramifications of global heating on the universe.