From the last few decades, there has been an increase in international tourism. Some people think tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be engouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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recent years, more foreigners tend to visit the

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it will benefit

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the local people and should be encouraged

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attract more often. In

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development. And in my opinion, with increasing in tourists and encouraging to drag more will

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local businesses, positively.

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, with increasing of more international visitors and encouraging more to come gives plenty of business

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opportunities

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income,

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will tend to be a positive financial boom for other businesses as well.

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, recently the Sri Lankan

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tourism

authority has come up with a decision to arrange a ticket and

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visiting

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foreigners to be efficient

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finding

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attractive

places to gather more visitors.

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to over popularity of

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foreigners

and unclean attractive destinations. With more and more visitors

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to visit the

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will be a huge demand for

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accommodations

accommodation

foods

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and other services

provieded

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provided

by local enterprises.

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, some tend to throw away

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every where

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which

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to have tidy and messy destinations which will be

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to the local community to expect more clients and cleaning will

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costly as well.

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, untidy beaches and other destinations. In conclusion, it is more beneficial to most tourist firms to be encouraged to attract more international clients to visit

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which may even

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them

as well as

the

country

itself.

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over populated

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foreigners may tend to have a huge demand for

accomdations

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accommodations

accommodation

foods

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food

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and other services

provieded

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provided

by local enterprises with untidy popular tourist attraction sights.

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