From the last few decades, there has been an increase in international tourism. Some people think tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be engouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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recent years, more foreigners tend to visit the
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the local people and should be encouraged
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attract more often. In
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development. And in my opinion, with increasing in tourists and encouraging to drag more will
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local businesses, positively.
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, with increasing of more international visitors and encouraging more to come gives plenty of business
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to the locals and
also
for the
country
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income,
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will tend to be a positive financial boom for other businesses as well.
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, recently the Sri Lankan
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tourism
authority has come up with a decision to arrange a ticket and
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foreigners to be efficient
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finding
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attractive
places to gather more visitors.
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to over popularity of
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foreigners
and unclean attractive destinations. With more and more visitors
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to visit the
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will be a huge demand for
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accommodations
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and other services
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provided
by local enterprises.
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, some tend to throw away
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every where
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which
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to have tidy and messy destinations which will be
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to the local community to expect more clients and cleaning will
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costly as well.
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, untidy beaches and other destinations. In conclusion, it is more beneficial to most tourist firms to be encouraged to attract more international clients to visit
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which may even
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them
as well as
the
country
itself.
However
,
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foreigners may tend to have a huge demand for
accomdations
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accommodations
accommodation
,
foods
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food
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and other services
provieded
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provided
by local enterprises with untidy popular tourist attraction sights.
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