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Students in university education should develop specialists in one subject area rather than create a broader range of subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, more and more
students
 are doing their university education. The issue of whether university
students
 should
study
 deeply in
single
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 subject area or a range of
subjects
 is widely debated. In my opinion, both
study
 paths have their advantages, but
this
 really depends on the type of
students
. It is usually accepted that developing specialists in
single
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 field is quite beneficial to
students
 who have exceptional talents in
this
 area
,
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 since
this
 can maximise their potential.
For example
, some
students
 may be extremely good at math, but they are not able to create a single
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. They will be so successful in math if they are allowed to fully concentrate on
this
 subject. After their graduation, they are usually more competitive and they are able to find jobs with decent salaries,
such
 as math teachers, data analysts, and mathematicians.
On the contrary
, if they are forced to
study
 courses that they hate,
such
 as art and literature, they are very stressed and likely to fail. Eventually, they may stop going to universities.
However
, learning a wide range of
subjects
 has advantages as well.
This
 way allows
students
 to figure out what they really like and what their strengths and interests are. College
students
 are not adequately mature, so they usually do not have a clear understanding of what each profession looks like. Most
students
 don't have exceptional talents
in particular
 fields.
In other words
, their performance in various
subjects
 should be roughly the same if they
study
 hard enough. By giving them opportunities to try different
subjects
, they have more concepts about these fields.
As a result
, they can
finally
 determine what kinds of jobs they really want to have in their future. In conclusion, I believe that specialising in a single field and learning many courses have different benefits and are appropriate for different groups of
students
. The former is suitable
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students
 who have extraordinary potential
in particular
 areas,
while
 most ordinary
students
 should try the latter.
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