Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. Discus the advantages and disadvantages.

Students especially high school graduates prefer to take some time off after their

studies

in

order

to work or travel around.

This

usually can be seen with the people who are willing to pay their own bills.

This

is by far the better way to expose themselves to society.

Although

there are a few disadvantages to

this

but still the vast advantages outweigh them.

Firstly

, on the positive ,side they are able to know the harsh reality and problems of earning

money

and

also

the importance of standing by themselves in society. Young people mostly take a break from their

studies

in

order

to earn more

money

which helps in building a good career for themselves right from the early stages.

This

phenomenon can usually be seen with students who travel across the country for their

studies

. Most Universities in the US charge huge fees for non-immigrants, so they don't have any other options, but to take the gap between their

studies

in

order

to pay the amount. On the other ,hand there are few individuals who plan on going on vacation in between their

studies

in

order

to escape from the hectic pressure they face and

also

indulge the life.

This

boosts their mental state and

also

allows them to perform more accurately. A university in south China took the initiative that every student should take at least 6 months time-off for every 2 years and they have seen better results after that and now every university is planning to go on with

this

model. In spite of the tremendous ,results there are a few drawbacks to

this

. Some Teenagers who started making

money

are accustomed to that and do not show interest in continuing their education. York University in Canada made a survey of students who dropped out from their classes and surprisingly they found that individuals like the way of life they are leading by earning

money

and are happy with that and not willing to continue their remaining

studies

,

this

creates a huge impact not just for them but

also

the country as they cannot produce more graduates.

To conclude

, taking time off from school is a very common sign among people nowadays as

this

helps them to evolve and

also

earn some

money

to pay the bills and tuition fee by themselves. ,

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it creates a huge problem when they are habituated to making

money

at the early stages of their career as it leads them to discontinue the rest of their education