Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

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It is been observed that as soon as the prison releases criminals after their sentence, the majority of them start engaging in the same criminal acts.

This

essay will examine the causes and the possible outcomes of

this

issue over society in the subsequent paragraphs.

According to

my belief,

this

behaviour is mainly caused by the lack of remorse and the circumstances surrounding their lives. Most of these criminals do not repent of their mistakes and wrongdoings

while

they spend their sentences in jail. They just consider it as a short break from their usual lives, and as soon as they get out they will engage in the same routine of pickpocketing, drug trafficking, shoplifting and even attempted murders.

Additionally

, life will not allow some of these wrongdoers to escape

this

behaviour.

Due to

a lack of education, literacy, and ,

skills

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no one is willing to offer them employment and

hence

they are left with either begging or stealing from others, which is the reason for a larger portion of these crimes. The increased rate of crimes, which is

also

contributed by ex-criminals makes the whole society feel unsafe and damages their emotional well-being.

For instance

, in 2008 after a twelve-year statement in prison, Kris Wu was released and

this

made the whole town of Bucheon in Soth Korea live in fear because he was abducted before for rape. The local police had to relocate Jack to a different area, considering the thousands of petitions received. It affected the mentality of the girls and young women in the area severely, to the point where the parents were not allowing their daughters to step out of their houses. In conclusion, lawbreakers roaming around society

while

engaging in more crimes after their penalty period is a significant issue and it is affecting the general public in an unfavourable manner interrupting their peaceful lifestyles.

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