Some people say that the main environment on problem for our time is to loss of particulare species of plans an animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Environmental
problems
have long been on the agenda. One of these problems
is animal extinction and while
the ones state that this
is the main issue in the modern world, others argue that today humanity has more urgent questions. In my opinion, although
the disappearance of some animal species
can produce disbalance in nature
, other environmental problems
can have more influential consequences in the future for all populations of the Earth.
On the one hand loss of some animal species
, which was caused by hunting and fishing for entertainment, may invokes
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problems
for other species
or plants. In other words
, damages in one part of nature
almost always lead to difficulties in neighbouring parts of nature
. For instance
, if particular species
of frog disappeared, amount of insects will rocket enormously in the future. However
, even though this
problem definitely should concern people and they should avoid killing animals just for their whim, it is worth noting that some animal species
have extinct because they could no longer survive in the new climate
and new conditions. What I mean, sometimes disappearance
of animals is a normal natural process.
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On the other hand
, problems
such
as the melting of Arctic ice and the increasing level of air pollution may create potential threats in the near future. I am convinced, that issues connected with global climate
are far more vital than any other problems
,
because they will make Earth no longer suitable for people's life. Remove the comma
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For example
, some actions in modern life enforce a rise in global temperature, which makes the ice melt faster. As a result
, it goes up the opportunity for a global flood.
In conclusion, I believe that in spite of the severity of problems
with animals' extinction, people should pay more attention to issues, which are connected with global climate
. Despite both of these types of problems
implying bad changes in nature
, climate
issues are able to eliminate entire life on the planet.Submitted by galima.ant on
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