PEOPLE LIVE IN 21ST CENTURY HAVE A BETTER LIFE QUALITY THAN PEOPLE WHO LIVED IN PREVIOUS TIME. AGREE OR DISAGREE.
Nowadays,
people
's quality
of life
has been improving. People
tend to do everything by themselves, believing they can do it without relying on others. However
, I totally agree that people
in the 21st century have a better life
quality
than those who lived in the previous time for two main reasons.
The main reason is the struggle is getting harder. People
that live in this
modern era, have to compete with others. They have been shaped to become competitive. Moreover
, the struggle that they faced becomes harder and it makes them stronger day by day. For instance
, people
that want to get jobs have to have better qualities such
as being able to communicate in more than 2 foreign languages in order to get the jobs. This
trend leads people
in the 21st century to have better life
quality
.
The next reason is improved technology
. Technology
has become an essential part of human lives. It helps people
in many sectors such
as education, society, crime, and medic. By providing high technology
, people
can do their job easily. For illustration, doctors can easily help the patient with the symptoms and specialized technology
. In contrast
, people
that lived in the previous time did not have these kinds of technologies.
To sum up
, people
that live in the 21st century have been increasing their abilities in many ways. The struggles help them to become strong and competitive persons. Moreover
, technology
also
contributes to their quality
of life
. They can do anything easier and faster. On the other hand
, people
that lived in previous times did not have these things in order to improve their quality
of life
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