The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2010 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the development of a university

campus

from 2010 to now.

Overall

, the university extends its area and

also

provides

student

facilities these days than previously.

To begin

with, we can see that there are limited facilities in 2010. Shops have been converted into

student

accommodation and extending

student

accommodation has been extended. In the past ,teaching blocks contain the arts and science departments.

However

, it has been built separately building, the science building used to be university offices.

Moreover

, another existing

student

accommodation which was located on the left side of

campus

has been replaced by

student

facilities building that contains shops , offices and other services . The lack has remained unchanged that located in the middle of the

campus

On the contrary

, the seating area and garden have been removed from the

campus

In addition

, the restaurant has been

also

removed and built footpath,which easily connects to every building on the

campus

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