A freiend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. th your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Elly How are you doing? I am very happy that you asked for my advice regarding the camping holiday. I definitely recommend you go on

this

trip.I know you have been working hard for the past few months and I think

this

trip would be a nice break ,

Also

you have been keeping telling me ,I need a break so I think

this

is a good opportunity to be in nature. I remember the

last

time I went to Bahar Mountain was

at the end

of spring so it may be a little warmer as you want to go there in summer.

firstly

,have an appropriate quantity of water for a day with you as you are at the top of the mountain and it is nowhere to be found.

secondly

,I recommend you take all your necessary types of equipment

such

as a good sleeping bag with you as the nights out there tend to be super cold. To be honest I would love to come with you but I am not sure if I can make it .I recently took a course in programming and the exam will be in the summer so I have to stay home and study. I hope you will enjoy

this

holiday, and I am waiting for your feedback about

this

adventure. best wishes, Sara

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