the two maps compare the changes of the community center

the two maps compare the changes of the community center
Presented are the two maps exhibiting the changes in the
layout
of = the design of a
community
centre
from past to present. As transparent from the maps, the function of the
community
centre
is simplified = simpler with the change in the
layout
. In the past, there was a small entrance in the north of the
community
centre
leading to the car park located in the east part of the whole site.
Additionally
, to its southwest corner, a large garden was situated, occupying one-third of the western area of the map. The remaining facilities of the
community
centre
include a cafe and two meeting rooms built on the west, and an art
room
, an IT
room
and a gym were erected = constructed/ built on the east. At present, the parking lot has been expanded
further
= increasing in size to the west of the original one, occupying almost 75% of the whole
layout
.
Moreover
, the area of the garden and a part of the gym has been converted into = changed into a reception area/ section. The IT
room
has been extended slightly = became a bit bigger,
while
the size of the art
room
has shrunk = decreased.
However
, there was no change observed in the rest of the
layout
including the two meeting rooms whose position is retained = which remained the same as that of the original ones.
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