The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The charts give information on the
figure
for water used for various intentions in six regions of the world.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
percentage
of industrial
use
is the highest in North
America
and
Europe
,
while
, in the other countries, the
figure
for agricultural
use
is the highest. Looking at North
America
and
Europe
first,
the
figure
for industrial
use
is the highest, at 48% and 53% respectively, followed by agricultural
use
and domestic
use
in both regions. The
percentage
of agricultural
use
in North
America
is 39%,
while
that agricultural
use
in
Europe
is lower, at 32%.
However
, the
percentage
of domestic
use
in North
America
is 13%,
whereas
that of domestic
use
in
Europe
is higher, at 15%. In terms of the other four charts, the
percentage
of agricultural is the most used water. The
percentage
of agricultural
use
in South
America
, Africa and South East
Asia
is 71%, 84%, and 81% respectively,
while
that of in Central
Asia
is the highest among countries, at 88%.
However
, the
figure
for domestic
use
is 19% in
the
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South
America
, followed by 9% in Africa, and 7% in both Central
Asia
and South East
Asia
. The
percentage
of industrial
use
is the lowest except
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South East
Asia
, at 10% in South
America
, 7% in Africa and 5% in Central
Asia
respectively,
while
at 12% in South East
Asia
.
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