The diagram below shows the water supply in Australia at present and in the future.

The diagram below shows the water supply in Australia at present and in the future.
The diagram illustrates how the
water
supply system changed following the structure in Australia at present and in the
future
.
Overall
,
this
is little difference between the two graphs. The most significant change is storm and wastewater will be only supplying the
water
treatment
plant
while
rivers will be pure and single flowing in the
future
. In the present year, the only clear source of pure
water
delivery is involved storage which is flowed into facilities.
Moreover
, wastewater flood is involved by towns to the
water
treatment
plants. After which it is stray towards the river
as well as
the stormwater is supplying into. In the
future
, it is predicted two sources of
water
supply (dam and
water
treatment
plant) in the map.
Furthermore
,
water
treatment
is an essential part of the
future
.
Following
this
will bring the useless
water
and stormwater before the delivered clear
water
process.
Finally
, rivers will be freedom, and wastewater and stormwater won’t supply
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, future, treatment with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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