People are living in a ‘throwaway society,’ using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

A number of

people

in our society nowadays use or buy things fast but waste them faster,

this

phenomenon is called "throwaway society". In my opinion,

this

phenomenon is caused by two main reasons related to shopping behaviour and give negative effects which will be elaborated on in the following essay. Generally speaking, online shopping platforms and fast fashion are famous among shoppers these days. Regarding market competition,

this

form of shopping offers low-cost merchandise and approaches online users conveniently.

As a result

people

can be attracted by vast types and acceptable prices of products; even though, the purchased goods are not necessary for the consumer's life.

In addition

, the influence of fashionable trendy is a big deal for modern

people

, especially teenagers and young adults. About notable circumstances, they will inevitably walk into a shop that has in-trend merchandise available.

For example

, if K-pop idols use bags that are the same collection, either their fan club or not their fan club will look for

this

style of identical bags immediately.

However

such

influencers frequently change the way they dress up all time and that leads to a problem.

Consequently

, buyer habits that are extravagance and controlled by today's marketing have negative impacts.

Firstly

, the young generation no longer manages their saving and fail to control their financial situation.

This

is because they consider their needs as a major priority rather necessity.

Secondly

people

insist to be on

this

social trend and a number of old-fashion goods become unwanted.

Therefore

, the world's waste is increasing in line with consumer demand

To conclude

due to

the advancement of online shopping

together with

fast fashion, "throwaway society" should be our concern in view of the fact that it affects

people

's finances and the environment.

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