the graph below show the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The line graph illustrates the number of 
shops
 in terms of closed and opened in one country over a period of 7 years.
Looking from an overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that the statistic of stores
 that both closed and opened all saw a dramatic decrease between 2011 and 2018. However
, the number of closed stores
 registered steep fluctuations.
A deep analysis of the graph provided reveals that the figure
 for closed shops
 experienced fluctuations in the given period. In 2011, there were around 6300 stores
 had to close. From this
 year, the number of shop closures began to increase and reached its peak, at around 7000 in 2013. By contrast
, this
 figure
 started to fall sharply to approximately 700 in the next two years. After witnessing a harsh reduction, the statistic of closed shops
 saw a considerable climb to over 5000, and then
 remained stable data in the next two years, at 5000 and over 5000 respectively.
As for shop openings, it can be seen that there was a significant decrease over a 7-year period. In the year 2011, there were about 8500 shops
 opened in that country, at which point this
 figure
 started to fall sharply to 4000 in 2012. This
 data started to rise roughly by 2000, at 6000 stores
 in 2014, after which this
 figure
 reduced notably to 3000 in 2018.Submitted by yeshomeclass on 
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