Life was simpler without so much technology.” Do you agree or disagree?

Many

people

claim that the modern lifestyle we have nowadays was not too complicated in comparison to the past. I agree with

this

viewpoint as there were a number of beneficial factors which helped

people

to occupy without having any misunderstandings among themselves and being less dependent on robotics. Nowadays we are living in a world where

technology

is well developed, which means it creates perfect opportunities for

people

to dwell more comfortably and enjoy their lives, but

this

way of living

also

has its own limits and complications. In the past ,humans there were not have any techniques like now and individuals did almost everything, including all kinds of physical activities. Despite the difficulty rates of these ,activities

people

were able to do, them because of the correct instruction for their project,

however

nowadays it can be a problem for

people

as they always try to rely on their robotic resources.

For instance

, the main director of Khan Learning Academy Johan Adams on November 2 in 2022 published on his blog on Twitter that “ Nowadays we are living in a society where

people

are happy by having a number of opportunities to study well or to work more effectively without spending their time or potential, these are because “

technology

“, but not almost everyone knows that it

also

had been doing until 2000 s and efficiently worked among individuals. We just simply understood the great importance of

technology

which we did not have in the past”. Perhaps that’s why many

people

do not want to admit the comfort of modern

technology

On the other hand

, in the past humans were able to rely only on their brains and physical abilities in order to finish their tasks which

people

nowadays do with the help of computers or robots.

This

way was not popular as it was too complicated which created difficulties during the working period. Almost all kinds of buildings which were made by humans without using

technology

are being saved these days, for ,example the Pyramids of Cheops.

This

great structure can be seen as a great example of how

people

were able to finish their projects without technical resources.

To conclude

, some individuals believe that our modern life is more difficult than we had in the past when we do not use

technology

too much and

this

viewpoint can be true as we throw outlook to the past.

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