The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001.
The given bar chart demonstrates the amount of wasted time in lessons by various school teachers. The supplied chart provides data about different countries
such
as Japan
, Spain
, Iceland
and the USA.
Overall
, it is clear from the bar that any academy type in the United States of America has the biggest number of hours
for teaching.
Turning to the details, 600 hours
were spent on lessons in the primary school in Japan
, while
Spain
and U.S.A. teachers utilized a bit more hours
for such
a basic educational centre. Regarding primary institutes, Iceland
is a country where a primary school did not have even 600 hours
.
However
, Iceland
's upper secondary academy has more than 900 hours
and which is a little more than Spain
's upper secondary academy. Both mentioned countries' upper schools spent hours
outnumbered considerably than Japan
's. In this
field , the U.S.A. is the best country with almost 1200 hours
.
The number of hours
spent on teaching is a little more than 600 and approximately 750 hours
in Japan
and Spain
respectively. In this
case , Iceland
's teachers of a lower secondary utilized 600 hours
, whereas
U.S.A's schools spent noticeably more than 900 hours
.Submitted by 29th of april on
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