The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to

adult fish.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of
salmon
from the spawning period to adultness,
Overall
, it can be clearly seen the detailed phases that
salmon
undergo in order to ensure the life process, from the spawning
stage
in the river to the growth
stage
in the ocean, Glancing at the diagram reveals that
salmon
migrates to the river in order to incubate the eggs, prior to
this
stage
, the spawning period is the first phase, following
to
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this
, after the
salmon
eggs hatch the next
stage
is rearing in the river where the water is suitable for
this
first adventure, at
this
point
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the
salmon
migrates back to the ocean before which lives a
stage
named ESTUARY REARING,
finally
, the
last
2 stages are reaching the rearing nets,
subsequently
salmon
remain in these areas to grow to maturity in order to start over the same life cycle from the beginning,
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