The following table shows the number of factory workers for a given time period in Germany.

The following table shows the number of factory workers for a given time period in Germany.
The table illustrates the sum of male and female factory
employees
in Germany in a period given with decade intervals.
Overall
, it can be viewed that the
number
of workers increased over the years
while
the
number
of
factories
declined.
In addition
, male
employees
were more than female ones in all years reported with the highest record reported in 1851.
Also
, in 1901, there was almost the same
number
of
employees
of both genders. In 1851, the
number
of male workers was almost one and a half times the
number
of female workers at 287,100 in 225
factories
.
Whereas
, in 1861, there was a mere increase of 2
factories
reported with the
number
of male and female
employees
decrease to 131,780 and 160,000 respectively.
Moreover
, the total
number
of
employees
in 1871 decreased by almost half to 140,123. Regarding the year 1881, the sum of the
employees
of the two genders decreased to 126,132
while
the
number
of
factories
rose to 721.
Furthermore
, the
number
of
employees
decreased between the years 1891 and 1901 to almost equal numbers of 31,000 males and 30,000 female
employees
with the lowest
number
of
factories
at 600.
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