Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems.

Many

people

think that government can be a major player to prevent illness and disease by reducing environmental pollution and find a solution to housing problems. In my opinion,

it is clear that

people

who take decisions for the population need to improve some aspects of their life and

this

subject has to alert him and need to be treated to secure future perspectives. First of all, the rule of governments is to provide the greatest living quality for

people

living in their countries. It is argued to believe that it can be difficult to find a solution which is accepted by everyone. To illustrate, an eco-friendly person gives attention to his health when another does not care about it.

This

statement means that it will be harder to convince the second adult to have the same point of view about ecology or reducing air pollution.

This

example shows the complexity of

people

representing humans.

Secondly

,

it

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many that an alternative to housing problems can solve many children from sicknesses.

According to

my own experience, I have already been sick ,

,

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however

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I was under great conditions to spend my childhood.

While

a lot of poor

people

complain about

this

, medicins say that it is unbelievable to be healthy during all his existence. In fact, ministers should focus more on

this

issue.

To conclude

, perhaps some surveys have to be done in strategic locations to make the best choice rather than use her knowledge. It can bring a better equilibrium.