The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time
The bar graph provides information about the males and females in Britain studying
further
education
either part-time or full-time between 1970 and 1991.
Overall
, both sexes show a significant increase in the number who studied part-time education
throughout the years. Whereas
a considerable decrease can be seen for those studying full-time education
. However
, it is noteworthy that during the given period, the number of men dropped while
the number of women steadily rose.
In 1970, 1000 thousand
males attended further
education
and studied part-time which is the second highest. After that, the figure went downwards to just above 800 thousand
, before it slightly climbed (roughly 900 thousand
). In the years 1970/71 to 1990/91, a minimal proportion of attendees studied full-time approximately between 100 – 250 thousand
.
On the other hand
, an upward trend can be observed in women who do part-time education
in two decades, rising from an estimated 700 to 1100 thousand
, which was the highest. Meanwhile, full-time education
is less popular among women in 1970 and 1971 (just over zero), which was the lowest. Finally
, just over and below 200 thousand
in 1980/81 and 1990/91, respectively.Submitted by lsc_00000 on
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