The charts below give information about attendance at Australian entertainment venus and admission prices to those venues in 2009.

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about

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the number of people who went to the three different

entertainment

venues in Australia,

their

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and their

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corresponding

ticket

prices per person or family in seven

entertainment

categories in

year

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2009.

Overall

, the

cinemas

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cinema

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is the most visited place among the three

entertainment

Autralia

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Australia

which had the highest number in

year

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the year

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2009,

while

the least in sports.

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category as well registered the

most

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cheapest

ticket

sale for a single entry or in a group in that year. In 2009,

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the cinemas

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cinemas

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cinemas'

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figure

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rose exponentially as many

Ausee

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users

enjoy watching movies, rising to just above 1000. Far behind theme parks, unlike

cinemas

, just above quarter went for enjoyment.

On the other hand

, sports are the least

favorite

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type of fun which accumulated only an estimated 180.

Furthermore

, the second chart presents four of the seven

entertainment

events: football

Game

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- (AFL,NRL, NRU) and theme parks are the most expensive admission prices per person or a family group approximately between 70$-75$ per

ticket

and 210$-298$ per family

ticket

(for four people) in the given period. Trail behind Basketball at 34% (1

ticket

) and 80$ ( for family), and Cricket game with

sale

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a sale

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price for each

ticket

( 24$) and family (80$).

Cinemas

demonstrate

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competitive

prices

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price

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which

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the cheapest compared to other fun events, a significant 15$ per

ticket

and for a group of four at 55$.

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The charts below give information about attendance at Australian entertainment venus and admission prices to those venues in 2009.

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